From what I see, my hopes wait at doors waiting for the keys
But you make my fears fade away , like the clouds do to the stars maybe?
So, we are light years away, the stars gossip about our distances
But you silence me , like the sounds of universe do to the chirps maybe?
From what I see, The seconds we talk are the the hours we never made through
But you freeze me , like the winter cold does to the trees maybe?
So, we are thousands of nautical miles away , the waves whisper about it
But you mix me up, like the falling rains do to the crying eyes maybe?
fabulous writing...
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Nice stuff, enjoyed your poem. Repetition of 'maybe' worked for me.
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Luke @ WordSalad
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ReplyDeleteVery beautiful Bandan!! Thoroughly enjoyed it
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